Wednesday, September 22, 2010
CCWT ( Continous Creative Writing Time )
There I was standing face to face or swimming face to face with a giant Hammer head shark. My friend Ansley and I are in Fiji on holiday. Ansley and I were swimming in the depths of the tropical Fijian waters. When the hammer head shark appeared out of no where. 'HELP' Ansley and I squealed. 'Its coming closer' I whisper to Ansley. CRACK.
To Be Continued!!!
To Be Continued!!!
Sunday, September 19, 2010
Term 3 Goals
School Goal: My school goal is to get a better spelling age. I will learn all my words and try all of the time.
Home Goal: My home goal is to get 8/8 pbs at East Coast. To do this I will train really hard and never give up
Home Goal: My home goal is to get 8/8 pbs at East Coast. To do this I will train really hard and never give up
Thursday, September 9, 2010
Thursday, September 2, 2010
Writing- Opening Sentence
The opening sentence should capture the reader’s interest. It should set the mood of the story, Introduce the situation and / or character /s
Ways of doing this: Dialog, A Statement, Problem, Action, Description of people, Place or time, Question.
" Get out of my way" I screamed to the police man. (Dialog)
I wonder where the key is. (Question)
I was sitting on the table. (Statement)
BANG as I fired the silver bullet. (Action)
I was at school when Jasmine got kidnapped. (Problem)
There were three girls they all had long black hair with brown eyes. (Description of people)
The clock was about to strike one (Time)
Gisborne is a warm sunny place. (Place)
I was sitting on the table. (Statement)
Ways of doing this: Dialog, A Statement, Problem, Action, Description of people, Place or time, Question.
" Get out of my way" I screamed to the police man. (Dialog)
I wonder where the key is. (Question)
I was sitting on the table. (Statement)
BANG as I fired the silver bullet. (Action)
I was at school when Jasmine got kidnapped. (Problem)
There were three girls they all had long black hair with brown eyes. (Description of people)
The clock was about to strike one (Time)
Gisborne is a warm sunny place. (Place)
I was sitting on the table. (Statement)
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