WALT: Describe in our writing

The waves roll back and forth on the warm sandy beach of Gisborne. The ice-cream shops were kids are yelling at the door ‘can we go in’ kids plead to their mum and dad. The lush green grass sways in the gentle breeze. The white woolly sheep ‘baaa’ in the lush green grass paddock. The bright blue sky shimmers down on the beach. Kids are building huge sand castles, while others are splashing around in the shallows of the beautiful blue sea of Gisborne. The older kids are out in the deeper waters body surfing, boogie boarding, and surfing. Right beside the beach is a park the red, yellow, and blue wooden logs which are painted in these three colours. Family’s are relaxing on the park tables eating all of their picnic food. After a long thrilling day at Gisborne the family settle down at the beach for a yummy kiwi kai dinner.

Self Assement:

Next time I can use paragraphs because that is my new WALT. I like the way I described Gisborne because it is an awesome place.